My village is the place l would like to live as long as l live.It is a wonderful place and it is not far from Denizli so at the weekends l am going there to visit my family and l am doing the activities that l miss but when l came back to Denizli l find myself in a big gap so l would like to talk to you about my village and Denizli.There are many big differences between them.
The biggest difference between them is their size.Because Denizli is a town that many people live but l live in a village that 2000 people live.l think this is the biggest reason of why l like to live in there because everybody knows each other.In contrast ,Denizli is a big place you can't know everbody.You feel yourself like a foreigner .
The other difference is that unlike Denizli my village is a green place and you can see the trees at every part of it.Yes,in Denizli there are trees but when you see the beautiful view of trees at my village you will see how right l am .
It is our first year in Denizli thats why we don't like here that much l think, but when we accustomed to here we will want to be here as long as we have time .Anyway;l love my village whatever happens and it is the only place l will be happy.
18 Mart 2010 Perşembe
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tayfun, maybe this is a compare&contrast essay.your organization is good , but you can improve your ideas.
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